3rd.....

After studying our poster a bit more we thought there was still a few things that we could improve on...

The first major change we made was we put in a background colour. We did this as we noticed on most of the posters we looked at had a background colour and we thought it would make our poster look a lot less plain. We also put the words 'when you collect 4 tokens' in a bubble. We did this because before we thought that we words didnt flow that well and it was a bit 'bitty'. We took away the capital on the word 'when' so it didnt look like a new scentence and it flowed a bit better. We also took away the one banner and put in 2. We did this so that the words 'FREE BOOK' stood out more. We also changed the colour as the salmon colour of the other banner didnt go well with our background so we had to choose a colour that went well with it. The final thing we changed was the angle that the book was placed on the poster. We did this as we thought at this angle it fitted in better with the text.